WRITINGAS5PECTATORSPORT

1)  Elizabeth Hotchkiss :  http://e2hotchkissrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/2013/02/writing-as-spectator-sport.html?showComment=1361851314909#c4921390756020002277

- She did her essay but no proof...

2)  Beka got Spinxed  by Kathryn ! Beka wrote a four paragraph essay. Her introduction was not very appealing to me. Her points should have been stronger, since she got to write more of a full on essay, should of put more time into it. I found it interesting to read, all in all, just needed to be a bit stronger.

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Brave New World    

Notes  Foreword / Ch 1

- in simple words: SACRED TO THE MEMORY OF THE WORLD'S EDUCATORS. SI MONUMENTUM REQUIRIS CIRCUMSPICE. 
- book about the future
- novel contains no reference to nuclear apparent.
- advancement of science as it affects the human individuals
- people who govern Brave New World aim for social stability
- "the problem of happiness" - in other words, he problem of making people love their servitude.
- a long way from bottled  babies and Bokanovsky groups of semi-morons.

- world states motto Community, Identity, Stability
-  Director giving a tour of the Fertilizing Room to the very young students (boys)
- Year of stability, A.F 632,
- Alphas/ Betas remained until bottled, when the Gammas, Deltas and Epsilons are brought out, and they undergo Bokanovsky's process
- Bokanovsky's process, bokanovsky egg will bud, will proliferate, will divided from eight to ninety-six buds. Every bud equals one person.
- Podsnap's Technique, to immensely accerlerate the process of ripening.
- Multiplying embryos from one egg into thousands
- Epsilons embryo must have an Epsilons environment as well as an Epsilons heredity
-  Epsilons don't need human intelligence
- condition the embryo's to how they want to to act when they grow up, example, "heat conditioning," condition the embryo's to prefer the heat than the cold. In order to want to live in tropical weather compared to the pole's. 
- the conditioning of the intellectual embryo's (Alphas)

My response after reading the foreword and chapter 1, well it's very sciencey , which makes it very interesting to read. I find it sad how they're playing with human nature, especially in the births of babies, and they're "conditioning." But I can't wait to keep reading. This novel is full of information and I'm ready to analyze the buzz out of it. I most definitely recommend this novel to EVERYONE!

First Quarter Review...

a) I would say that this semester I am not as motivated to enter my blog posts on time. I choose to do another homework and I usually push this class homework till the next day. And I end up procrastinating. Even though I am not as on time as last semester, I still managed to get all the post needed for my blog. All the work is on there, just a few days late then the assigned date. My senior project is coming along, mostly just doing research right now until I further my planning with the project.
b)  Post assignments on time
read all the reading assignments
study more
c) the course progress is okay with me and I feel that there is no need for change or alterations.

BOB I

Blogs who have been doing good work.

Sarah G  http://sgrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
Kathryn   http://kgreenuprhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
Hayden   http://hrobelrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
Will        http://wveroskirhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
Ubi        http://ukimrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
Josh      http://jmonterorhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
Katelyn http://kporrazrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
Ryland   http://rtownerhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
Jackie    http://jthompsonrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
Michelle http://marriagarhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com
Jenna    http://jhaloprhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
Kayla   http://kstevensrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
Rocio   http://rrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
Kasie    http://kgurgiolorhsenglitcomp55.blogspot.com/
Ryan     http://rnguyensaplitcompblog.blogspot.com/
Beka     http://bcastillorhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
Owen    http://oinessrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
E'Ana   http://ebordonrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
Sara A  http://sarmasrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
Kellie    http://kgriffithrhslitcomp.blogspot.com/
Ruth   http://rsierrarhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
Laura http://ltrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/
Madison http://madisonmather.blogspot.com/
Landon  http://lbfor3.blogspot.com/
Pual    http://pkimrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/

i am here..

The first grading period of second semester is finally here. My goals have been slowly coming along very well. For the classes that needed improvement from last semester. As of English... my blog posting as been a bit slower this grading period and I can only blame myself. I am still working on it. I have a feeling that my mojo is kind of slipping. I just need that mojo to come back because the big goal for me right now wold have to be the AP Exam. I need to study study study! Cause in the end it will benefit me.
As of  my senior project, it is coming along. Already have an idea and have begun some research. I am still reading more to get a ore understanding of exactly how I want to come across it and present it to my class.

Literature Analysis

Great Expectations by Charles Dickens

Remix

GENERAL
1. Briefly summarize the plot of the novel you read, and explain how the narrative fulfills the author's purpose (based on your well-informed interpretation of same).

- Pip's expectations are 1) fulfilling the role of a gentlemen, at the same time is still searching for love and finds something about Estella that catches his eye. 2) Pip finally has money and is crazy about all his money, but Estella isn't so crazy about Pip just like he is about her. 3) Pip looses his money (value included) and is finally ready to become a real man "gentlemen". He reaches his expected point and in the end after loosing himself, money, love, he managed to gain it all back and be happily in love with Estella.

2. Succinctly describe the theme of the novel. Avoid cliches.

- Two main themes within Great Expectations revolve around social standings and self improvement.

The social classes inside of England didn't have to deal with real worth. 

- Joe, Biddy, and Magwitch are good hearted  characters in the story but apeare themselves to be on the lowest level social classes. 

- Drummle is rich but has a horrid personality. 

Self -improvement was a second great major theme. 

- Pip was always open for improvement. He knew he had to learn how t read and was ready to being his education. He knew he had to be Good as well. What do I mean by Good you ask?? Well good as in an all around good person, with a good education, good life, love life, good with money, good person, good heart, you get my point... With this you can see that he had "great expectations" He looked for improvement mainly in the areas of social status, morality, and education. 

- Dickens knew that yes you must be ambitious but our ambition must be a productive ambition. 

- Moral ambition means to build ones character.

  

3. Describe the author's tone. Include a minimum of three excerpts that illustrate your point(s).
- Pip's story is his change from childhood to adulthood/ wisdom.
-to teen years--to adulthood-

4. Describe a minimum of ten literary elements/techniques you observed that strengthened your understanding of the author's purpose, the text's theme and/or your sense of the tone. For each, please include textual support to help illustrate the point for your readers. (Please include edition and page numbers for easy reference.)
-Metafor - “It was one of those March days when the sun shines hot and the wind blows cold: when it is summer in the light, and winter in the shade.” (122)
-Narrator - “In a word, I was too cowardly to do what I knew to be right, as I had been too cowardly to avoid doing what I knew to be wrong.” (77)

-Figurative Language - “No varnish can hide the grain of the wood; and that the more varnish you put on, the more the grain will express itself.” (100)

- Climax - " did really cry in good earnest when I went to bed, to think that my expectations had done some good to somebody " (257)

CHARACTERIZATION
1. Describe two examples of direct characterization and two examples of indirect characterization. Why does the author use both approaches, and to what end (i.e., what is your lasting impression of the character as a result)?
-- Direct Characterization- It would have been cruel of Miss Havisham, horribly cruel, to practice on the susceptibility of a poor boy, and to torture me through all these years with a vain hope and an idle pursuit, if she had reflected on the gravity of what she did. But I think she did not. I think that in the endurance of her own trial, she forgot mine, Estella (378)

- Indirect Characterization - “I noticed that Miss Havisham put down the jewel exactly on the spot from which she had taken it up.”

2. Does the author's syntax and/or diction change when s/he focuses on character? How? Example(s)?
-The authors syntax/diction changes depending on each character.
Magwitch is a poor man, who is a criminal and his ankles are changed. Throughout the novel you get a clear understanding that Magwitch is poorly educated.
"This is a terrible hardened one,"they says to prison wisitors,picking out of me. "May be said to live in gaols this." They always went on agen me about the Devil. But what the Devil was I to do? I must put something into my stomach, mustn't I?" Ch 42

Criminal  and poor English skills

- Estella is much more educated and of high class. She makes sure that she is known and when she speaks to Pip she speaks with such a sophisticated manner but with a witty sense. 

3. Is the protagonist static or dynamic? Flat or round? Explain.
- Pip falling into a dynamic and round character traits, reveal his personality and his inner thoughts about his whole adventure in accomplishing his great expectations.

4. After reading the book did you come away feeling like you'd met a person or read a character? Analyze one textual example that illustrates your reaction.
- As I read this novel I had a feeling like I was inside the novel and just watching everything go past me before my very own eyes. I enjoyed reading the novel and loved the drama within it. Reading about Pip's journey in finding himself is an experience to feel, because it was expressed very differently, especially in that time and country. Gave me another understanding of how everyone's journey in discovering themselves is totally different. Interesting is a good word to describe it all.

THE TIME OF MY LIFE

THE TIME OF MY LIFE

Friday's class was productive. wr talked about the novel that we are reading, Great Expectations, and we clearified some information that wasn't so understanding to us.